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Part #6 - Why?
WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 12/04/2012 03:10:29am

Grrrrr hurry up and update girl I need more

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 07/02/2012 03:24:35pm

I think you should keep doing each girls point of views with the guys to
see what is going to happen. This is my second favorite story.

HarleyVengeance                   (User #7909) N/A 07/25/2011 07:11:23am

You updated.! :D

Damn, was Matt pissed or what.?!

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 07/21/2011 02:35:54am

Oh wow Matt seems like he pissed i dont see this ending to
good for me. I think out of everyone im going to be the one hurt
the most :(. Thats okay maybe something will happen that will
make up for it.

Part #5 - Brian' Confession...
WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 07/01/2011 07:29:16pm

You need to update this story i want more. Please please please
update. Ill update mine if you update yours.

Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/02/2011 07:55:39pm

*while I was reading the reviews.. all I could think of was Poor Matt... because he's always made out as the bad guy! :P*

I was a little surprised when Brian said he hadn't killed anyone. How could you be in such a business!? Did he just handle paperwork or something!?

I can't wait for the next one.. I'm itching to read more!

(I haven't seen Repo! The Genetic Opera either.. haha!)

-Ashley

Part #4 - Letting Go
Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/02/2011 07:51:04pm

A lot of POV switches.. got a little confused! With the violence, I assume they're going to act like repo men..

But I think there's going to be a major twist!

Okay, not gonna lie, that would suck to get your organ(s) repo'd!

-Ashley

Next one...

Part #3 - Falling Out
Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/02/2011 07:48:41pm

Rule number one: Do your job, don't fall for your clients!

I agree with Synical Doors.. It's like Repo Men! Although, I have never seen that movie... :)

Next!

-Ashley

Part #2 - Prologue
Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/02/2011 07:44:56pm

Uh-oh.. swooning for the enemy? :D I like the idea of this!

On to the next!

-Ashley

Part #5 - Brian' Confession...
WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 05/12/2011 06:11:56pm

Just reread it. I cant wait to see who is the meanest. I have my vote on
Matt though because he seems like the leader. Update soon I want to
see what happens next.

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