Mascot "Kumi" © 2005 Chastain & Fan Works Inc. All Rights Reserved. Mascot "Kumi" © 2005 Chastain & Fan Works Inc. All Rights Reserved.
 
Memorial - In Loving Memory of Chester Gregorich, 1981-2005
Home | Directory | Help & Tools | Just In! | [Search]
[Log In | Join]

Musicians/Music Groups Fan Fiction >> Taking Back Sunday >> Your Name's Just a Few Well Chosen Words off of the Tip of My Tongue >> Reviews


Reviews Per Page

Reviewer E-Mail Date
Lady Control                   (User #5648) N/A 04/04/2008 09:01:21am

I thought it was really good. Short and to the point. These were my favorite lines:

his own private nirvana

They were a package deal, his mother joked, buy one, get one free

huge, sharp, and glinting seductively in the light

Would his parents miss him? Or would they miss someone to take the blame of their petty fights.

As he presses the blade to his skin and slices his arm lengthwise, enjoying the sting, watching the little rivets of blood snake their way on his wrist, the door opens with a snap.

----Honestly, you are one of the best I've read. You write good. I read stories to see if anyone has talent, to see if bands truly inspire them and you were one of the best I've read all year, so props to you!

Lady Control                   (User #5648) N/A 04/04/2008 09:01:16am

I thought it was really good. Short and to the point. These were my favorite lines:

his own private nirvana

They were a package deal, his mother joked, buy one, get one free

huge, sharp, and glinting seductively in the light

Would his parents miss him? Or would they miss someone to take the blame of their petty fights.

As he presses the blade to his skin and slices his arm lengthwise, enjoying the sting, watching the little rivets of blood snake their way on his wrist, the door opens with a snap.

----Honestly, you are one of the best I've read. You write good. I read stories to see if anyone has talent, to see if bands truly inspire them and you were one of the best I've read all year, so props to you!

Submit A Review
Annonymous Reviews require a VALID e-mail address, or the review will not show up.
Name: E-Mail:


[Return to Top]
TOS  |  Privacy Policy  |  Questions/Comments?  |  Found a bug?  |  Report violations of the TOS
Powered by E-FanWorks v3.9.9b © Null Referrence Software 2003-2006